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"Be careful, Alice. Watch your step, Alice," repeated the Cheshire Cat as she walked through the valley of the spikes. He stood in silence as he watched her weave in and out of the sharp, elongated death-trap.

He held his breath, watching as a spike plummeted from the top of the ceiling, thinking her end was near. He closed his eyes hearing the spike sink into the marred ground, his heart stopping. 'Was she gone?' he thought. 'She never bothered to listen to me that silly girl... but now who will save us? Who will save her?' He opened his eyes.

To his shock, the last of the butterflies took off around her as she continued through the maze. She survived. "Impossible..." he said to himself, "but then again, this girl has yet ceased to amaze me." He stood above the shafts, his claws sinking into every board, his golden eyes watching his broken mistress continue forth on her journey.
This is a little something that I wrote for the new game "Alice Madness Returns".

The game is amazing but the 5th world is scary as fuuuuuu =____=. Plus it is basically the same place where I got the idea for the fic.

Note: Always listen to Cheshire. If not, prepare to have spikes impaling the top of your head.

AN: I don't really like this fic and I'm not really sure about it.... *sighs* I honestly don't like the way I write most of the time so I guess that's part of it
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devil-snow Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist

I really like how this turned out :33
RokuUkeRoku Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
thanks :)
devil-snow Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :333
frans97 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This fic shows that regardless of his creepy grin, deep voice, and menacing figure, the Cheshire Cat seems to worry and concern about Alice and her driving determination to continue on even in the most impossible of circumstances just to save her Wonderland.
RokuUkeRoku Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
it does. :) a few of my friends have written some on their accounts on and they're really good.

[link] here's another fic kind of like this cheshire from my friend's friend. :) my friend is listed on there and she's written some too if you would like to check it out :)
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